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Friday, March 11, 2016

Flash Fiction Friday - 03/11/2016: Apprehension

Happy Friday everyone. 

It's time for another flash in 100 words.

I have something quite interesting in this piece.


Detective Kent busted through the door, with his gun drawn, along with two uniform officers who also had their guns drawn. They wanted to apprehend Ignacio Suarez, but they found lying on the living room floor dead, in a pool of his own blood.

He wondered what happened. When he looked out from the living room balcony he noticed a woman with long dark hair and a shapely figure in a white bathing suit standing outside. Next to her feet was the gun she used on him.

“LAPD, ma’am,” Detective Kent said.

The woman turned her head and said coldly, “He should’ve never cheated on me.”

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  1. WOW! This is an intense flash Ray! Need to know so much more to what lead up to this, and what will become of her now. This could be an awesome detective story!! Great job!

  2. No such fury as a woman scorned and all that. Great flash! :-)