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Friday, October 24, 2014

Flash Fiction Friday - 10/24/2014: Don't Answer

Hey guys, it's time to end the weekend with a Friday Flash Fiction, up to 100 words.


Nyla was in her wardrobe room, barely putting on her cream-colored corset dress. She picked up her compact mirror and looked at her reflection when her phone beeped on the counter. Nyla set down her compact mirror on the counter and checked her message. When she looked on her screen, Nyla was in dismay over her little sister’s message. She insisted of asking where she was performing.


For a second, Nyla wished she hadn’t told her sister that she got the part acting. She got the part performing sex acts at an underground theatre. Her little sister may not understand.

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5 comments:

  1. Gutwrenching flash, Ray. Obviously, she had to make a decision. Decisions create repercussions. You really nailed it in these brief few words. Terrific Flash, Ray, no matter her reasons. Bravo!

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  2. excellent flash Ray with the unanswered question of why is she doing it? So much more to explore

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  3. Tsk, tsk, Nyla. No use trying to keep it a secret now. LOL Great interpretation of the pic, Ray :-)

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  4. Very nicely done. I loved the twist. I wonder if her younger sister will find out eventually. Great flash!

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  5. Hope her sister never finds out the real way. Great flash

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