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Friday, August 9, 2013

Flash Fiction Friday - 08/09/2013

It's been a long time since I've been on here. Here I am, ready to come out with another segment of Flash Fiction Friday, posting a snippet of only 100 words. 


Keith just finished wiping the snow off his car. Then, without warning, a snowball smacked the top of his trunk, taking Keith off-guard, wondering who the hell threw it at him?

He looked behind, and noticed a young teenager from far away, yelling, “Good morning asshole!”

Keith kept his cool. He didn’t need to react. He picked up the remaining snowball, packed it with some more snow and aimed it at him, hitting the young kid hard in the stomach.

Keith was such a perfect aim with force, the kid was brought down to his knees. He replied, “Good morning to you too asshole!”

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  1. Nice one Ray. Now who's the asshole? Does he have a score to settle? You need to write more

  2. Keith's retaliation was appropriate for the lousy kid, asshole.

  3. Ha, that got him! Hopefully he'll learn some respect!