Love Out Of Lust Series

Saturday, July 2, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday: Excerpt to About The Night Ride Home

Excerpt from Chapter 6: March 18th, 2006:

Please keep in mind this is just a rough copy of the story. It may be subjected to change.

It's been a very long time for them since they have gone out together. They weren't sure if it was a date or just two friends hanging out for the night, but their night felt like deja-vu, and they were continuing where they left off.

As for Darla, it has been more than a week and she has developed feelings for Tyler. She really wanted to know if he felt the same way about her? In fact, she was curious if he remembered where their relationship was left off; in the dance club when he confronted Charlie?

Her heart has never felt so vulnerable over Tyler. She remembered the first time they spent the night together; he was the most perfect date ever, and now two years later, he is still the perfect date ever, except things are different now. She asked herself what was she thinking when she told him they were better off to be friends?

Yet, things couldn't get any more tormenting as she watched him put on that cologne that made her dropped her panties two years ago. It was that same cologne that drove her to hunger and lust at the sushi restaurant, and she's afraid it might happen again; right after the dance club.



Ray Sostre's "About The Night Ride Home "

Set for completion: Late Summer 2011.

8 comments:

  1. I loved it, so much emotion and I want to know what happens next and what came before. Excellent Six.

    Sam

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  2. Ohhh...that vulnerable word... we aren't allowed to use that word in my house- great 6
    Dawne P

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  3. Friendship or love? Want to know what she decides, though I think I have an idea! Loved your six.

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  4. Very nice sweet man - I really love this one

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