Love Out Of Lust Series

Sunday, June 26, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday: The Tub



They have waited a long time to be together, and finally their dream has come true, as both Olivia and Greg enjoy their worldly evening with a mixture soap and suds, and fulfillment that cleansed their misery.

They knew what they were doing was wrong; both Greg and Olivia were married to people that never made them happy.

They knew the consequences, but they were willing to risk it, if it meant that Greg will lose his business to an overly-ambitious wife. They knew the risk if meant Olivia had to face her jealous, insecure husband.

Their passion for each other was way beyond the danger. They were bathing each other with affection and bliss. For the first time in their lives, their hearts felt safe at a motel room 120 miles away from home.

12 comments:

  1. OM Lord Ray! WOW- is all I can... love the build up- and hey, we've all been there
    Dawne P

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  2. Excellent piece Ray.
    *bites n kisses*

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  3. Talk about a scorching teaser!!! Loved it Ray.

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  4. Thank you everyone. I really appreciate the feedback.

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  5. Very intriguing, now I want to know more about these characters and why they weren't together originally. Nice six, Ray.

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  6. I agree with Jean - I want to know more!

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  7. WOOT welcome to Six Sunday, Ray! And what an entrance.. FAB SNIPPET!

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  8. Good job! Welcome to SSS!

    But now I want to know more--from inside the head of one or the other character. I'm into deep POV. :)

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